Great flow with the usage of espression, just as a tip, leave the reader with an affective line att he end. i havent read ur other poems, but mayb you could make the last line something for the reader to remember

Okay first of all you're right. I was trying to get more people to read by the name. Second my best poem ever is Broken Hearted. Third you wrote an awesome poem. And who is this Ana you keep speaking of? I guess i'll ttyl.
-Vino

Omg i know you said you hated peple writing comments like i loved it but i really did ....its like you took the words out of my life...i really hope that you arent writing this from persoanll experience as i know wat it is like

keep safe

XoX *~CrImSon__TeArS~*

Wow, aaw, this is a really great poem, it flows well. 5/5 keep up the good work :)
~*~Yours-Truly~*~

The plot of ana inhabitating is unbelievably dark and nice...grrt poem...i liked it alot in addition to the other ones ive read, grrt job and i look forward to reading more....,
love ya lots,
sore

You know i am actually glad you said wat Ana was cuz on one site i write about Ana all time and people mistake me for a Lez. even though theres nothing wrong with it..

5/5
Brandy