I relate to this poem because I was so hurt that I doubted anbody could love me even though somebody keeps telling me he does now.

I thought the ending of the poem was your strongest and most beautiful part. It tied everything together and showed a start of growing strength even if you don't have the speaker explain it. It was also your most vivid part as far as imagery. The metaphors were nice and stood out a bit.

Wow the rhyming in this one was SPOT-ON :D
I love the nature imagery, I'm a sucker for it :p and this poem is great for showing how caution is often misplaced
Beautiful poem :)

I like this line:
Unto the wings of secret sins
Underneath a silky pool
and the rest is a typical love poem. nice job. i like the rhyme.