Really good poem huni, it flowed very well, and presented ur feelings perfectly. dont be too hard on urself tho, take care,
xxEmmaxxx

It's a really sad poem- its really emotional but its also good.

I love your poem, and I also thank you for commenting on my poem. I hope to see more like this!

You did a great job on this & i can definitely relate to it. The rhythm & flow was good & you worded it well.. Great job on this!