I am in love with this poem! it shows so much emotion and flows really well. Great work 5/5

THAT WAS GREAT, AND FOR THE FIRST POEM I THOUGHT IT WAS EXCELLENT
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Brillaint peice, very strong with some great expression. well written overall.

5/5

Very expressive
emotions flowing
keep it up
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I think this is a very well written poem! I can't wait to read the rest of your poems. Excellent job. Keep it up!

~Brenda