Danielle,
This is a strong poem...
can you put any thing specific in it
like imagery to help us make a
mental picture in our minds as we read it?
I have thoroughly enjoyed having such a wonderful student such as you. Keep in touch... my email is mdonlangarts@
yahoo.com
Best regards,
Ms McDon

Yes, put more imagery in it because there's absolutely nothing in there that would bring an image to my mind.. nope not at all. xD
haha. Mrs. McDonald is a loser that poem is full of imagery. Loved it.
-Tamra Atkins