Wow ..great poem, one of the best i've ever seen. 5/5 keep up the good writing.

bye-x RockPix

Woow thats amazing
[[and it is cause i usally dont commenet on poems =]=$]]
i love this poem
keep up the good work

check out some of mine?
love alice

This is such a good poem!!!

i know EXACTLY how you feel, too!!

you have really good rhythm; thats what i like in poems.
some people can rhyme, but.. dont have a beat to it. but your poems really do! i love this poem a lot.

ah.. youre a good writer.