Comments : X Missing Pieces

  • 18 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Very well done, Sole!

    Thank you so much for participating in this challenge!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Dohr

    I like the use of the extended metaphor. Women are a subject I am much less than perfect in, haha. Yet another great write!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mark

    A kind of depressing in a way poem.. You just need to fix these parrts from here..

    Itâ??s her face you blur

    That's all messed up.. other than that I enjoyed the read.. another good poem.