Comments : Broken Smile

  • 19 years ago

    by Kelsi

    Hey, I really liked your poem. It was very well written and I really liked how it rhymed. Good job and keep up the good work. Just remember that there's people out there for you and that there are people out there that love and care for you! So, keep your head up and remember to smile! :) Good job on writing your poem again, keep it up! Loves, xXxXx!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by .mommy_3

    Thats a pretty poem. keep writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by my blue eyes cry

    This is amazing i love it!!!

    ~Brittany