"Keep your head held high
Don't let it fall to the floor
In only a few more years
You'll be walking through freedom's doors"

I adored this stanza...and found this poem...inspirational...yet entertaining and light -hearted at the same time...wonderfully written. Interesting how you constructed it....nice job!!

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Brilliantly written peice, the flow and structure are good and the content well thought though, it's very upbeat and full of hope which is very stronly entrined into the content of the peice,

5/5

A very touching poem that expresses your love . The power of your words will give your brother strength knowing you are there for him at the time when he need your love the most .
A very heartfelt poem Hun and your love for your brother is felt through each and every line .
Take care !

Wow that was really good and i figured that you were probably writing it to someone that is somewhere else like prison well good luck to both of you
XxKaylaxX

Wow that was really good and i figured that you were probably writing it to someone that is somewhere else like prison well good luck to both of you
XxKaylaxX

I can tell you care about him a lot (= The last two lines made me laugh too, I was like "What?" lol.

That's so encouraging. I liked it. 5/5

Another poem well done....

I think that was very kind of you to write that to him because now he probably feel like he has a home to go to now when he out and that he is still loved and that he can depend on you when he going through the hardest things!!!!!

This is a touching piece. I loved the first stanza it is hopeful and inspirational especially when you read the comment at the end.
A lovely upbeat tone as well.