Comments : Last Dance

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    WOW... sad yet soo true... i can really relate to that... this is truly the end yet it's considered a beginning also..
    I loved the topic... keep writing..
    5.5

    Much Love,
    Ipsita

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Strong message from the beginning to end. Yiu have beautifully described how I felt when I was finishing school.
    Wonderful flow and beautiful write!

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Beautifully done, I love the flow to this poem... Your words are sincere and heartfelt, nice work! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Nicely done..watch out for puntuation in areas but a very simplistic rhyme which works well.

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow...excellent. words can't describe how touching this poem is. i especially liked this part.
    "lets dance the last dance tonight
    and show our love in all its might
    feel that beat; fall into a trance
    because this is our last dance"
    great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Beautifully written. Really nice take on the subject, reads nicely.. good work!