Jay, You are a great writer and I believe that alot of people won't go through this kind of pain, which is why they will never understand your poem. But for those of us who have been there, we understand and those are the people whose opinions you should really care about. gr8 work,
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Hunni don't die. I love ur poems and u seem like da sweetest guy ever. U r a great guy. U just fell in love, we all do. We all jst have to stick together.
Love u,
Rose

great poets like you should never die over lost love... i know its hard but we all go through it. and if not for losing love you may have never writein this poem so love is your insparation wether its forever love or lost love keep it up and dont leave this world..

~Kendra