I know the feeling, very well written, beautiful work. 5/5
keep the great poems coming.
love jessie.
p.s. if you have any time, can you please check out some of mine?

Well it was great with the rhyme scheme. Not really sure I liked this piece yet it had great flow and a cool word choice. Overall good job.
~Faith

Great job! Just one thing, the last line, it could be "And I can't seem to help her soul" Not too important, just the rhyme.

Excellent
5/5