Comments : She walks.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    This poem is very good and very well written. The only thing that I did not like about it was this part:

    Seeing life through her tainted heart,
    Making everything gray,
    Alone, her life, a new start,
    Always searching for a day,
    Throughout everything...

    every other stanza only have 4 sentences and this have 5..I just thought that it kinda through off the flow of the poem a little bit. But other than that, it is really really good. Keep it up.