Hey it is pretty good

This is really long! lol sorry i didnt read it but since its long its prolly pretty good.

This was fairly decent, but you should think about changing the structure of the poem.. maybe some more organized stanzas?
just an input :]

WOW!

Whoa that was really good, and really sad... nice job

GREAT POEM, one of the best ones i've ever read. well done. its tooo good

That poem was..so sad! so you say it's based on a true story?!? if i was in a situation like that i don't know what i would do!!! i almsot cried! Awesome poem!!!