You can really feel the intensity in the poem. Its really good! Keep up the writing. WiLlYoUmEnDmE

Oh hunny.... i feel for you throught this... i really do

Omg ur amazing writter...i wish i could write half as good as u!!! ur poem is so good.....its so deep and like sad....i love it!!!

xoxo
~Little Lizzy~

Woah........excellent, your a really good writter roxy gurl.....

really need too pee now though so sorry comment not longer like the length you gave me-haha....

october xx

You make me want to cry.5

5/5. WELL DONE!

very well written. this one affected me the most outta some recent ones ive read

Wooow tha was a really meaningful special peom , it was grreat i loved it soo much it was fabulas keep up the good work

luv jesikah

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Hey wow this is gud stuff man 5/5 man keep it up i loved it :) thanx belinda

Wow loved this poem .very deep. five all the way. keep up the good work

vaney

You like to write sad stuff, don't you. well at least your good at it! keep writing.

Good stuff, thanks for the comment xx

Ur poem is realy good hunni xxxxx

Sad but great!
Very very very good indeed!
5/5

Wow great stuff. i love ur poem. u r truly talented

Omg ur poems r so touching like me u luv ur family xx

5/5 this was great poem n when u left that comment itz not a guy itz a girl who i like.

Wow thats really deep

Interesting..

october xx

Yay you write with such emotion which is what poems are all about. great job keep writing. thanks for your comment on my poem

WOW. Really deep and emotional. This sounds like it came from your heart and its full of emotions. Another great write.