Wow thats good

Really good you have a way with word, wish i had talent like yours keep up the good work!
sarah

Thank you guys for all the nice comments - i never really thought that my work was that good... but thanx SoOoOoO much for being so supportive!!! i promise that whenever somebody comments me... i instantly look at their profiles and look through their poems as well because i like to see who the person is behind the comments.... ThAnK yOu GuYs SoOoOoOoO mUcH!!!

Hey this poem is awesome too. it reminds me how i feel about the girl i love and how she dont even care how much i love her and she keeps trying to make me hate her but the more she tries the more i love her. keep writing

WOW!! This was a GREAT poem. You definately know how to put your feelings into words & i love it! This poem showed so much emotion. It was amazing!

This is an awesome poem...=)
thank u for the comment on mine

OMG! That poem was compeltely amazing! The best of your I've read so far. I'm not sure how, but it reminds me of my poem 'Living Love' . I would appreciate it if you took time away from your busy day of reading all the comments I'm gonna make on your poems to read some of mine, especially 'Living Love.'

Ok..this is way better than my poem!! i luv it so much!! thnx for leaving a comment on mine by the way...im rele glad u enjoyed it!! u better keep on writing...i read all of ur poems..they are spectacular!! keep on keepn' on!

luv laffalot

Awww!! This reminds me so much of my boyfriend and I right now. I love it, just love it. It's cute and sweet, the rythym and flow is perfect. Great Job.

Wow...That was amazing.I havent read poems that good in a while.The rhyme and flow are amazing..Keep up the great work

5/5

Wow...this poem was sooo good & I'm serously not just saying that, u have so much talent, u just made it on my favoret, I love this poem, it really touched me, plz never stop writing because I love ur poetry.
**Jennifer**

It's just what everyone wants from a the one you love, for them to be there for you as you are for them. You portrayed this very well. You must of covered almost every aspect of a relationship too, which was good. You had some very beautiful lines in there too, especially at the start.
I'll put you on my favourites also.
Keep writing.

You just string words together so easily! and they sound so perfect together! the flow and the rhymes in this poem were great, there was a lot of emotion and it really shone through! nice write! 5/5

Keep up the good work, meggie. i really enjoy your poems. lalala
i love ya!