Comments : Why

  • 18 years ago

    by Mephastophilis

    Even though you might not feel the same
    I would trust you with my dreams
    My heart, my soul,
    and all that in between

    I love this stanza- i thinks it fully captures everything love is about- being able to completly give your all to someone selflessly- the poem flow quite nicely- you've got talent- especially considering your age. Take care. XxX

  • 18 years ago

    by ~~Lindsay Woods~~

    Hey u..nice job...its a 7!..lol...the question is who is it about???

  • 17 years ago

    by Tasha

    This was a super good poem. And I think I know like exactly how you feel. Thanks for the comment by the way. 5/5. :) -Natosha