This was so uniquely written. I'm glad that some writers can still write stories about things that matter--The values that won't be lost, if people like grandfather continue to pass them on to the next generation.

Great poem - I think the collaboration worked well. Thoough there were a lost of changes through form, it started off as a poem, and gradually became a conversation, before turning back towards being more of a direct poem again. However, tis did not even scratch the quality of the poem. It was incredibly well written by two obviously talented people.

We're can't find hope in things that are lost.

I think this would make more sense as We can't find . . .

Peace. [Sole]