Yes . . thanks for that. I suppose I could say the rhyming was . . . better . . . than last time. I think this poem has a more scarring image than any other poem I've read . . . EVER.

Peace. [Sole]

I found this very disturbing and I hope this is not based on experience....it certainly made me chuckle...then cringe but it was funny and rhymed well...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

OK you changed that from the original! Ask Sole for it...she found it the other day

AWESOME! lol haha yea the Beatles are pretty much the awesomest band EVER! Maybe you will read some of mine! bi

That suck balls you suck balls
that was so bad i felt like shoving paper up my crack. u desirve to get beat with shovels!!!!!!!!!!!!!! im just kidding that was funny