Wow! I can totally relate to this yo! Don't you hate it when you love somebody so much..then they stab you in the back and pretend. I hate it. GREAT poem!
HeAtHeR

Fancy stuff... I like it :D

I can feel the hate, but the love also. What contradiction between the two.

You where only in my dreams, and I have awakened

That was a great line but in this context it should be

were not where.

Peace. [Sole]

This is a really good poem. you are an awesome writer. good job. i like your poem

There is such emotion put into this poem...great job! i can relate..... its all to real

Keep it up! :)

~Kat~

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