Really superb write. Beautiful, really beautiful 5/5

This is an absolutely beautiful poem and the imagery really transports the reader to the spring. The last line is very haunting and stands out as something quite bleak amongst the beauty.

Ok, now thats just not fair. youve written too many good poems!!!! normally if someone writes loadsa poems i only comment on a few coz loads are rubbish. but ALL of these are soo beautiul. so im not commenting on any more. not today. so nyah! see how you like it.

i think the reason youve written soo many without me noticing is becuase i keep only readinbg your featured poems and forgetting the others. arnt i clever?
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