I loved the short phrases and the power in each one of them.

Beautifully written once again sweety. It's brilliant! =)

Lotsaaaaaa love
-xxx-

Short but it works
the last two lines fit together really well
x.

I love how each sentence is short but says alot
I love it!(again!
-xxxx-lots of love!

Hey love. i haven't commented on one of your poems in a while so i thought i would today. i liked it. it was short but i felt it had depth. i liked your choice of words, very creative, well, i think anyway. good work love, and i shall speak to you soon.

Brad

I really love this poem, not just like but love its so sweet and beautiful and frabrent. great write

xox
love stained sheetz
(P.S I wish i was halff the writer you are)

I really loved this 1...it's simply Great n powerful in it's own way...Kp writing!...Kp up de gud job!
xxPoojaxx