Nice work... I really love it...i feels so real...
-Luba

Damn good writing! That "little voice" is a necessity. The realistic, life like approach to this poem is fabulous.

I was depressed you havent written in so long but it was all worth the wait... Nice job
XxKaylaxX

Depression gets many of us down and if it wasn't for the "little voice" in our heads, some of us wouldn't be here to write about it. Many emotions are running wild in this write, well done Luke. Stay strong and know that I'm here if you ever need to talk. Hugs and Love to ya sweetie.......

Hey thats really good!! i like ur style!! kepp writing!!

love ya .x.x

Hey look love the poem
remember to take a look at it on my site
www.miss-love-u.piczo.com
luv gaby
keep up the good work
c u on msn