Simple words but a very powerful meaning. your emotions of hurt n betrayal i felt was on ur piece here.

you took away
all that was mine
you took away my colors
you took away my shine

so here i am
with nothing left to give
i dont want to be here
i dont want to live

these parts were my favorite cuz i can realte and has many people can too. feeling all alone but yet they arent cuz they have their friend to help them right up. you did a great job here once again. keep on writing.
4/5

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy