Wow I really like this poem. I especially like the way that you ended it. Kind of inspiring. I really liked this. Great job! 5/5**

The words are well put togethor and it seems that your so desperate that its just let out

Well Done
Sondos

Dang! so many peoms and i don't know where to start! i really like this poem! great job...maybe if you separe lines be eaier to read! 4/5~