by Simon Hayes
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Dhaval... This is a wonderful write. You tell a mystic tale which is wonderful, inviting and very capturing. It made me smile and filled my heart with joy. Great writing, Angela is sure to enjoy this one :) |
by Angie
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^And it enjoy it I did..... |
by Laura
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Beautiful hearfelt dedication!!!! |
by Chelsey
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So she`s sold a few unwanted books |
by Bri
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That was kindof funny. i liked it! |
by Bridgette
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Lol that poem is very cute & I love the title. You did a great job on this! |
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Ooh liked this one 2. very descriptive, and the rhymes flowed well. 5/5 |
by Jessica
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Woow! this was wonderful! it was so descriptive, flowed really well, and had lotsa emotion! keep it up! |
by Darien
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Ahahah awww that definitely sounds like Mother Angela.. a very nice poem. |
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Great poem, very descriptive and flowed well. Good job 5/5 |