Comments : Watching you love someone else

  • 18 years ago

    by Sexi_Cassie

    This poem is definately a 5/5. it shows true sadness and hurt in a broken relationship

  • 18 years ago

    by MeLiSsA

    Wow.... ive definetely felt like this before.
    this poem is really good
    keep up the good work :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    I have just finished reading it and it was brilliant! I loved it! Well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by looshluvstuna

    Amzing you touched my heart because i know the feeling a little to well
    hun keep on typing your heart away your an amazing poet.
    love leia.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lucy

    It reminds me of him... I feel like i want to cry. I'm so lonely. My heart is shattered.

  • 18 years ago

    by shaneka

    THIS IS GOOD GREAT FANTASTIC

  • 18 years ago

    by Yamanaka Vic

    I know how you feel, theres this guy at my school, who loves another, and all I can do is sit alone, and do nothing.

  • 18 years ago

    by PoeticMystery

    I HAVENT BEEN ON DiS SiTE iN MONTHS & DiS POEM iS THE FiRST WUN i'VE READ & i MUST SAY "i LOVE DiS POEM." bUT iM NOT SURPRiSED, i'VE ALWAYS REMEBERED DAT i LOVED ALL UR POEMS CUZ U'RE SUCH A GREAT WRITER SO KEEP UP THE WONDERFUL JOB!

    Na-Na

  • 17 years ago

    by xxxNecaFamousxxx

    OMG! This is such a good poem! I could never write like that...you are one of my favorite writers on this website you are way good at writing this one almost made me cry! I hope that you keep up all the good poems and never stop writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Toni Ann

    Oh that is so sad. I almost cried. I think that you write really emotionly touching poems and I think that you should keep it up. Wish you lots of luck.
    ~Toni Ann~

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    This is really deep! 5/5!