I liked it... of course, that could have to do with my infatuation with vampires, but hey, whatever. And if you want, I've got a great Vampire website for you.

*DeAtHbYmOnKeYs*

This is great ur a really tallented poet keep it up love claire xxx

Wow this is great i like it alot. i like the way u explain things like her emald eyes and stuff

Your writting is very deep. I love it. Nice work with this one, it's great.

-Jennifer.

This is like really awesome.I love it soooo much keep up the good work.5/5.
xoxostrugglingxoxo

Amazingly detailed. It sounds like you could make a novel out of this. Really liked it :)