The poems that I have read so far are unbelievable. They are fantastic. Every single one I read of yours, I just had to give it a 5! They are fantastic!

I really like how you have this part in the poem:

How must I break free of this?
Is there even a way out?
Can I flee, run, or hide
Yelp, scream, or shout?

I just like how you questioned everything. Great job! I added you to my favorites.

This one flows really nicely. I think this is my favourite of yours, the way it ends is so powerful, absolutely brilliant. A captivating read.

Oh yes, this is pretty neat. i adore it. u ahve a definate gift. well done

Your vocab is pretty good for your age. One of the things you need to develop the more you write :)