Really powerfull, not as many mistakes as usual, but still a couple..., anyways, i liked it

Last line: "with in" should be "within" and "your" should be "you're".

This seems less like it should be put under "Love Poems" and more like something about life experiences and stuff like that. The point behind it doesn't seem to be just the fact that one's in love, but who, and how, and why. Just a thought.