I like it it was inspirarisonal (spell check). Nice job

Well done again!! If only all people could SEE the way YOU do.

Wow.. amazing.. agaiN! lol.. your truly have a talent and should never stop writing! there was only one problem i could find with this poem ::

He heald my hand, my mind.
^ i think you meant to write "held" not "heald"

but other than that, excellent job! 5/5