Mmhmmm.
i LOVE this poem.
its got very good flow.
and i can deff relate!!
GREAT JOB!!!
thanks for the comment on mine!!
keep up the wonderful job!!
yours truly,
meg.
oxo.

Thanks all of you for commenting!

I like it but i'm not sure if i understand it. it's really well writen though. well done! x x x x

I like it but i'm not sure if i understand it. it's really well writen though. well done! x x x x

Lovely!
I know it,may not be,one of your newer ones but I love it!
5/5
Oh thanks for the comment

WOW nice job Shannon, I lyked it all it made ma eyes stick to tha computer screen Ur a gooooood writer
SUPER KOOL Y-E

~Jstuckie~

This poem was amazing, I could really relate to it. It had a lot of thought, and emotion in it. And you're choice in words were awesome. Good job. :)

I really liked the beginning with all the descripition and how everything wasnt working, but the end kind of confused me alittle. it seemed to me that you went to hell because you killed your self, but the beginning made me think that you couldnt do it.
iono it seemed like the beginning and the end were good seperate, but together they just didnt quite fit

I think everyone has said my thoughts. Great job. I love it 5/5.

XXXXBrandywildsXXXX

U out do urself.... great work, actually great is not the word to use... brilliant, i dont even think that is goood enuff to describe ur writting!!! 5/5

Omg i love this. my friend sore has it printed off (she prints off her faves) and its in a folder of hers lol. so ive read it a few times before now lol. but this is awesome. keep it up.

Once again what an awesome poem...ur just too goood 4 words