Comments : Cowgirl Cheyenne (Honky-tonk 'ell) lyrics

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Hehe - nice. I'm not a big fan of country music to be honest - but these lyrics are good. You should find a country band on myspace and send your lyrics to them - you would get the credit and I'm sure they would be more than happy to work with great lyrics like those!

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Really nice work here, my only advise is that when you write lyrics to lable them, you know [verse1] or just [v1] will do, [v2][v3] or however many [chorus] [reprise] [bridge] ect... other than that, really nice work, you sure its your first?? :P keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Omg...even though i'm not a fan of country music these lyrics left me speechless. this is really good...i loved it.

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    This was good. I don't listen to a lot of country, so I was unable to imagine a song to it. But that may just be me.
    Love,
    Line

  • 18 years ago

    by Sondos

    That was a very intense song. I think that its well rhymed with a pretty good beat and a good story

    Sondos

  • 18 years ago

    by Daniel Mulvany

    I don't listen to music unless I'm in the car with someone who does themself. I do like some songs. Honky Tonk Badonkadonk, and other such things. Anyway, it's good writing. Keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Wow..the chorus is so memorable I found myself humming along and tapping my feet to this one, it certainly is different from your usual stuff but I think you pulled it off pretty well.

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Wonderfully written lyrics Kaylee... Your talent shines through. Great writing :)

  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    I love country music that was very good i think you should write more country songs 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This is really good! I wish i was as talented as you! This would make a great song, the flow in it was absolutely perfect!!! I definitely think that you should write some more! Great job! 5/5**

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Good job Kaylee! I like this. You did a great job at a country song. I think you should write another one.

    Drank whiskey, downed another beer.
    There goes the Devil saying, “No fear.”

    ^^This was one of my favorite parts of the song. Good job and keep up the good work. 5/5

    I didn't find one thing I didnt like in this song. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    For a country song.. This was pretty good. I'm not really into country music. But I rekon if this became a song, I'd listen to it. Wondeful job. Keep up the great work. I love reading your poetry! 5/5 And thanx for the comment. Meant alot!

    `natalie xx

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    Well I'm hardley a country fan...but as I write lyrics I can still appreciate that this is an excellent song!
    You kept the flow well, and didn't lose it once, the repetition wasn't overused but very effective
    I loved it...your vocab is also well chosen
    Kepp writing :)

  • 18 years ago

    by StefQ

    I totaly agree with sole :) i'm not a country music fan but those lyrics are very good :) you should try to find a band to work with :) 5/5

    ~StefQ

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey I liked it! It was really great and the flow was brilliant. I thought it was a little different to what I usually read and that's what I liked about it. Keep up the great work :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    I'm not much of a country music fan. But when I read this lyrics it really takes a shine. This would make a great song. You write with such detail. I love it. Music is inspiring. Yes,you should write another. Kat

  • 18 years ago

    by Mark

    I'm not a big country fan but what you write is .. wonderful! I loved it :) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    Another really amazing piece! I don't really know what to say other than that you are obviously incredibly talented! Again I'd really love to hear the music that accompanies these lyrics as I feel that it would really bring the words to life. 5/5! x

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    I thought it was great myself.. im a big fan of country music though.. it was awesome loved it your very talented 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Dohr

    Haha, an interesting song I must say. Not extremely well written, but heald my attention the whole way. Great job!!! I really enjoyed the chorus...