Comments : The long lost dream

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very inspirational. In a way, it reminds me of..me. Good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Evil love

    You are a very good poet, i really liked this poem, keep up the good work

  • Well done, another great message you portrayed through your poem,
    Love

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Loved this one it reminded of me so much lol :):)

    the only thing

    She burned deep within,

    you have already used burned on the line before perhaps use hurt or something. good loved it

    xxx alex xxx (5)

  • 17 years ago

    by marcelah

    Inspiriational. I loved it, I love all your work, but this one by far is the greatest.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Good one, very emotional. It is deep and well written. Great job,5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Beautiful. You have a real talent, and I truly do mean that. Keep writing, and most definatly enter a few contests(watch out which ones you enter onling) you really can become an amazing poet to fine tune your already perfect poetic views. A full 5/5 from the Veg Poet

  • 15 years ago

    by Kathy Worden

    BRAVO...self love and self inspiration spilling over to inspire the rest of us! Very well written.