Comments : Love through the grapevine

  • 14 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Hey this poem was really good. Very heartfelt. I love your poems, you're a great writer. Keep it up. And thanks for you comment on mine. :-)

  • 14 years ago

    by Lithium

    I like what you've done with this poem how you've set it out and the theme you've used its very beautiful, they words you used are also fantastic they go well together, great work david xox me

  • 14 years ago

    by Kaylalala

    Wow that was so good and it wasn't forced ryhmes. Awesome
    XxKaylaxX

  • 14 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow, this is really a wonderful poem & i could figure out y u related urself with my poem "Layers Of Pain"

    these last two stanzas are simply great
    Ill sow my heart,
    wipe the tears from my eyes,
    Soar through the sky,
    spread my wings and fly,

    Taking my life,
    is letting life take me,
    so release me from love,
    please set me free

    just loved them, u just keep on writing as there is a long way for u to go

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by creeesta

    OOOOooO I LOVE IT! I'VE NEVER READ ANYTHING LIKE TI! KEEP IT UP!!! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Johanna

    Wow, I love this poem. The way you use repitition just makes it flow very nicely. It's definatly from the heart too. Keep it up, you've got quite the talent =)
    - Johanna

  • 14 years ago

    by Sar

    Really beautiful *wipes tear from eye*
    i love your poems

    "if heaven where birds
    then she was the dove"

    i love it, just beautiful

    sarah x