Hey this poem was really good. Very heartfelt. I love your poems, you're a great writer. Keep it up. And thanks for you comment on mine. :-)

I like what you've done with this poem how you've set it out and the theme you've used its very beautiful, they words you used are also fantastic they go well together, great work david xox me

Wow that was so good and it wasn't forced ryhmes. Awesome
XxKaylaxX

Wow, this is really a wonderful poem & i could figure out y u related urself with my poem "Layers Of Pain"

these last two stanzas are simply great
Ill sow my heart,
wipe the tears from my eyes,
Soar through the sky,
spread my wings and fly,

Taking my life,
is letting life take me,
so release me from love,
please set me free

just loved them, u just keep on writing as there is a long way for u to go

all the best and take care
5/5

OOOOooO I LOVE IT! I'VE NEVER READ ANYTHING LIKE TI! KEEP IT UP!!! 5/5

Wow, I love this poem. The way you use repitition just makes it flow very nicely. It's definatly from the heart too. Keep it up, you've got quite the talent =)
- Johanna

Really beautiful *wipes tear from eye*
i love your poems

"if heaven where birds
then she was the dove"

i love it, just beautiful

sarah x