Good job..

That was alright, i'm not one for somgs but it seemed really good

Awesome song, I sort of made up a tune to it as I went along . . . And it's about something which has a point! I won't go on about how cruddy the schooling system is . . *Resists urge*

Peace. [Sole]

I kind of made up a tune to this too. Seemed a pretty good song- some quite valid points made.

[lostlaureate - come find me]

"relys" should be "relies"

Anyway I can totally realte to this poem, about how adults protect their children from the truth...but they can't do forever
As a song it would work very well, I can almost hear it now!
Great again :)

Very good job i allso found my self makeing up a tune for it as i went along that just goes to show how well it was put together.

Well said! It's so true, you grow up in a world of ideals and then one day you have to find out the hard way that honesty is absolutely NOT the best policy and that life isn't all fairy cakes and candyfloss...I totally agree! I remember being idealistic once...=p Great write, really inspired 5/5 x

I liked it...its very true i agree with you..good job!!! keep writing

I liked it...its very true i agree with you..good job!!! keep writing