This is such a great poem, very good flow and rhyme :), well structured ;)

If only things were easier
If only you didn't need to worry
we always seek for this in our life ........but we still worry and think a lot ..........this is life and this is how we go ........ I hope we can really cast everything behind and never mind!

This poem is very well put i really liked it keep up the good work lil loco

I really enjoyed reading this poem. You have talent. You really know how to use words. Great!!!

This is a GREAT poem. I love the structure and how it is so short. Keep up the good work
xoxoxox
Jess

Short but soooooooooo true.