I (L) your poem. i really like the rhyme.
5/5 keep up the good writing.

bye-X RockPix

Great work here, I think u should continue it ;) loved it :)

Really good and keep writing love ur work

I really like this one. It just makes me think.

Good job, besides the fact that it's real sad, i loved it.

Gurl once again i luvvvvved it i am now hooked onto your poems

I like it. it one of the best i read 5/5
well done. you sounded real heart broken in the middle stanza

Omg it was so good

I like this one too. i hope this isn't real. but if it is i feel for u. i think ur a brilliant writter. keep up the good work.
love
willow xxoo

Haha that was wickedness... but i think mine was better lol we'll compare next summer!!

That was a good poem 10/10

Wonderful Poem.
All of your poems are amazing.
Keep it up.
c:
-Kelli