Cool, I like th way its put together. It works well. I like the fact that there isn't really a set ryme schyme

Very interesting its good i like it keep it up!

Hey i like this poem, cause it speaks the truth in more ways then one, things always change for the worst, i really like this poem, please keep up the work, hope things change in your favor buh byes, greg

"Every last bit of my existence "
that line is so powerful and meaningful
absoloutley amazing

Hey. i love how u wrote this. it was awsome

Loved it 5/5

I like it alot.