It's difficult to understand, but I gave you a 4/5 cuz it's creative. Good job.

Hey, I'm checking out your poems because I saw the discussion board you made. I dont know why you think your poems are bad, because they are actually really amazing. At least, this one is. The only advice I have is to try to make the paragraph things a little shorter, so it can manage to stay in one line.

Very creative! i loved this! its very good, very original! keep it up! 5/5

Hmm.. Ilike the setup of the poem. It flows rather well and actualyl makes sense. Great Write.

Hmm.. Ilike the setup of the poem. It flows rather well and actualyl makes sense. Great Write.

Your poem is so sweet! I loved the ending, it is perfect.

Great job! 5/5

Very nice poem, I usually dont like reading long poems but this one kept me reading

Wow i love this one its really good. lol and my thing is megan33 WIERD! lol ttyl much love xoxo keep it up!!

Great write, and thank you hun for the rate and comment on mine. I especially loved the 8th stanza, very beautiful.

Hey! Thx for commenting on my poems! Urs are great! Keep writing! =))