Hey girl, be patient i am sure things will work out between you and the person you wrote this poem about. I am sure soon enough he will realise he likes you too and if he doesnt then he isnt the one for u and he is the one missing out on a terrific person. 4/5 from me keep writing the poems as that was great.

It was sweet and beautiful, very touching and it brought a tear to my eye cos i wish i had a friend like that, very good work :)

Now this is a really good poem. Good job hun. It has a good flow.
love ya
~Nichole~