I love it
i understand every singe word in that. i feel what they mean
5/5
beautiful job

Aw this poem is so sad. It's really well written the flow & rhthm of it was great & really helped bring out the sadness in it. My favorite stanza was:
Band-aids don't heal the wound
All they can do is cover.
Just as my mask won't make you stay,
but hide the hurt of losing another.
That was just really good. Great job on this poem. I absolutely loved it. Great job! 5/5**

AWESOME!!!! u almost can't take another breath tell it's over. the rythme is perfectly smooth. the poem captur my deep thoughts. i love it. amazing job!5/5:)