Oh wow great poem. Some big words in there. I love how its kind of like a mixed poem, like the 1st n 2nd stanza is about freedom kinda, n the 3rd stanza is about love. I don't know if its mean't to be that way, but its good.

P.s. thanks for the comment you gave me it was greatly appreciated

Now thats quite meaningful & i just loved it.

all the best and take care
5/5

My favorite stanzas were the first one and the last one, they're strong and well written. I also liked the message, I think it's very important to be independent.

XoXo
Gaby