Comments : Spiraling

  • 18 years ago

    by Luke

    This ones short too and its good, but i think you can do better, longer pieces that would totally rock. so keep writing and expressing yourself, youll find a natural flow where the words just seem natural and rhyme may not matter as much. cyaa,
    -Luke

  • 18 years ago

    by Holly

    Wow, get out of my head! ; ) I have a guy like this that breaks me then builds me back up! Good Job.