by Luke
Nice lil poem. if it was written forever ago, then i want to see some of your newer stuff, this definetly showed potential. take care and thanks for you comment, |
by Bridgette
This is really good. I like the way that you ended it. Some times some of the things we thought we knew turn out to be totally different. But anyway.. I get where your coming from & you've got some major talent. Keep writing. I can't wait to read more! |
by Holly
Again, Great Job! Wicked great. 5/5 |