Comments : Eternal Darkness

  • 18 years ago

    by Luke

    Nice lil poem. if it was written forever ago, then i want to see some of your newer stuff, this definetly showed potential. take care and thanks for you comment,
    -Luke

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This is really good. I like the way that you ended it. Some times some of the things we thought we knew turn out to be totally different. But anyway.. I get where your coming from & you've got some major talent. Keep writing. I can't wait to read more!

  • 18 years ago

    by Holly

    Again, Great Job! Wicked great. 5/5