Comments : (20) Feel my pain

  • 18 years ago

    by Chantelle

    This poem is really good, flows well, shows alot of emotion and you ended it well. Great work hun xx

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    What a depressing poem...all your featured poems I noticed were very sad...the continuous use of questions worked well...and the final lines heightened the sadness...well written...I hope all is well...

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Lexi

    Lol thanks another 5/5 i would give you more. I love how you write poetry keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by lisa

    I like it!! It helps me connect to myself that is awsome!!