OMG
You deserve a much higher rating for this tim
Its beautiful
'That's what Im talking about!'
lol
no seriously Im doing my bit and giving you a valuable 5
wow
~Em

Aww this is so cute xx x ur a great writter =] 5/5 WOW

Hey Tim! that truly is a beautiful, somewhat mysterious poem. it's so ..... flowing even though in physical lines it does not..... it's so beautiful. I absoluetly love it. Champion work, mate. champions.
-Snoo