Hey gorgus
this is a awsum poem ;) keep i up 5/5

You know what i feel touch w/ this its really good,, i like the last lines..

i cry tears of pain with no end in sight
not knowing if ill be alright
i give my heart my all to you
i question if real love is true
thinking of death as my only way out
wanting to see what the afterlife is all about
too many ways with no end in sight
would it be right to end my life
or should i continue to fight.........

coz sometimes i also ask this from my self..will life must go on and u have to move on ok! i like this poem very nice