Nice work, there were a few lines that didnt seem to fit, but overall, good job!

"Random," sums up this song, and that's what makes a song great! I love it!!!

This was pretty good! Very emotional and honest. Good work. However some of the rhymes were a little choppy and predictable. But it was still very good.

I really like this. I really don't have much comment to say about it, and let me explain why. I have a difficult time commenting on/rating songs, mostly because in order to truly appreciate a song usually you need to be able to hear it as well as/instead of read it. The musical accompaniment is usually necessary. This is probably the first song-poem on here that I didn't feel like I needed that for. It was good on it's own right. Fantastic job :)

Really kool like tha other one! write more lyrics! it's awesome!