Great poem but you must really hate your dad. you managed to get your emotions across well.
Jade x

I read your profile, and I was actually wondering if this was a true poem, even though you've mentioned that many of your poems arent.

True or not, it was fantastic
~Flow never broke.
~Kept interest through-out.
~Great word use.

All in all a well deserved 5/5

Thanks
Em